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Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« on: September 21, 2010, 09:37:09 pm »
July 1st, 2245

it's been 50 years since the war. Since the world burned on top of us. I've seen pictures of the world when it was beautiful, when the air was fresh and the monsters weren't around. I've heard people say the world will return to that some day. **** liars. Giving the kids false hope, so when they grow up and try to save the world they get killed by the beasts.

Me? i've seen the world, it's not pretty and I don?t want to spend more time there then I need to. Part of me wants to die right here, put a gun to my skull and end it while i'm ahead. If you can call living on a train ?ahead.?

but the ?priest? says that killing yourself is suicide, and suicide is a sin. But when I point this gun at one of those monsters, he calls me a ?religious warrior.? I could care less what he thinks, but killing myself would be the easy way out. No, I intend to leave a record of my life behind, so maybe, maybe, I can help some other sorry soul down the road.

My Name is Wheatly, I have no last name and I live on the savior, a train of people who believe there's a patch of the world that survived the war, that has no monsters, no sinners. We travel west, ALWAYS west. Most of the people on the train have been brain washed by the priest, a man who claims to have a magic book, and if you do what the book says you'll be saved.

I don't believe that crock, but they do protect me from the beasts, so I guess i'll learn to tolerate them.

Because you might live decades after i'm gone, i'll tell you what my world is like.

According to the historian, an old man who claims to have once lived in a great catacomb of knowledge, the world used to be a very peaceful place. Well, maybe not peaceful, but not like it is now. According to him, there was once a great war between humans, and some unknown creatures. They appeared outta no where, and ripped through the human military's, which were organized troops and war machines.

And after time, people lost, and the monsters took over. Except they didn't lose, they are still around and will one day take the world back. At least that's what he says. As far as i'm concerned people have lost and now we are just fighting for survival.

I don't have time to write much more. I have to go collect supplies for the savior. If I make it back, i'll continue this, if not, assume i'm dead.

- Wheatly


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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2010, 10:35:34 pm »
Didju write dis!?!>!


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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2010, 12:24:31 am »
Didju write dis!?!>!

uh...yeah? did you think it was a real journal from the apocalypse? or was it just that good?



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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #3 on: September 22, 2010, 02:36:30 am »
No, I figured it may be the work of someone else. Good job!


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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2010, 11:32:50 pm »
No, I figured it may be the work of someone else. Good job!

thanks! also he died.



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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #5 on: September 25, 2010, 12:23:28 am »
a.k.a. you're lazy


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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #6 on: September 25, 2010, 02:05:20 am »
a.k.a. you're lazy

no, i've actually got plans for a newer better story. it takes place in a steampunk western world, set to the soundtrack of "WET."



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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #7 on: October 03, 2010, 09:42:34 pm »
That was as much of a troll story as my Pokemon Mystery Dungeon nuzlocke.

It got the audience excited about the story, the main character, and set up the first potential conflict.

Then it ended in a troll like death.

Rapidash0660's beautiful creation is above these words right now. You should all go ask for a sig from him in the Art Board because he needs something to do :P

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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #8 on: October 04, 2010, 12:46:06 am »
Can I continue this story?


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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 08:53:55 pm »
Can I continue this story?

NO!

i'm continuing it. i'm just coming off a nasty stomach virus so i'm not up to the task yet but it's coming! ****'s going down.



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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 09:52:27 pm »
Son of a ****!

You said it was over.

I was thinking of a bunch of continuations.

:(
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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #11 on: October 06, 2010, 06:10:01 pm »
Son of a ****!

You said it was over.

I was thinking of a bunch of continuations.

:(

eh, i'm not sure anymore. so who knows, amybe i'll give it to you. for a price.



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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 06:26:30 pm »
lol


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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 09:18:03 pm »



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Re: Wheatly's journal 1st entry
« Reply #14 on: October 08, 2010, 04:49:24 pm »
Cool story bro